Somethings there,that isn’t bright,
somethings there without light
wondering where to find some
if its one or maybe none
i look into free spaces everywhere
upon the surface and inside layer
there’s something that i miss now
unknowing where to find and how
busy feelings and slave thoughts
of past or dead doesn’t rot
unable to figure what happens
life and lifelike dampens
struggling to explore that something
for some life is better than dumping
That is a beautiful poem. Did you write this?
thank you perpetua and yes, i wrote this, feeling all that about my life and the best way to express it was in the form of a poem .
Beautiful. I have seen post that they write about life in poetry style. I think I would like to learn your style. Namaste.
thank you and sorry for the late reply actually am at my mom’s place, as my sister in law gave birth to a baby boy( my nephew ) so we had a lot of rituals, ceremonies and function at home, will upload those pics very soon am sure you would love to know about those rituals too.
and yeah the poetry is free style nothing much except for the rhyme’s ,without it i find it hard to write my poems.
Hope you are doing great .
will catch up soon with some new exciting posts.
Congratulations, Auntie! A new baby, I can’t wait to see the pictures and the rituals.
I am still trying your style, I am having no luck just yet.
Take care and regards to the baby and mother. Sending good wishes.
thank you so much for the lovely wishes dear.
i just came back , will post the pics and about the rituals very soon .
And don’t try too hard on following style, let the words come naturally your way be it any style just let it flow.
hi how are dear sister
wish you are fine my blessing to you dear
yes bhaiya bilkul thik hun abhi deli se lauti bhabhi bhaiya ko beta hua hai toh usi liye gayi thi puja and function tha..bhot accha laga wahan ,,abhi wapas aagyi hun ..jaldi hi baby ke pics dalungi..
aap kaise hai ?
wah ghar jake aagayi mari behena, bahut bahut acha laga, khub khus raho aur fulo phalo yehi bhaiya ki prarthana hai bhagwan se, buhut khus rehna
And thank you for connecting with me. It’s a pleasure to meet you here in this virtual world.
thank you so much tanumoy. Looking forward to read interesting posts from you.
Ah, you always bring smiles with your visits… there’s one on ‘world music instrumentals’ waiting for you. 🙂
🙂 thank you ..
Always a pleasure. 🙂
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please choose any 4 awards out of the 27
accept it and oblige
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congratulations bhaiya..itne saare awards wow..and thank you so much for nominating me too.
and kaise ho ,,hows life ? kuch naya khabar shabar batao..
my dear sweet little sister
I am fine and doing well
routine life dear
how are you at last settling??
be happy always
choose 5 or 6 awards if you want
no restrictions for you
hehehe mujhe pata hai mere lie koi restriction nahi..
bhaiya sab thik hai life going good..
thinking of doing studies further..sab studies chut gaya tha coz of all the turmoils so thinking fir shuru karu job baad me karenge..kya bolte ho aap ?
sab thik hai aur tum khush ho to bahut acha laga
sada khush raho yehi prathana hogi
thank you so much dear
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A token of my appreciation:
Very well written shilpi.. Loved it!! Too good.. U write from ur heart and from you life. Keep writing!!
thank you so much ankit .